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'Search-Engine-Friendly' Copywriting Style Is Often Not Very Friendly To Humans
by Rob Garner, Wednesday, November 21, 2007, 1:15 PM

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If there is one black mark that some search-engine-friendly copywriters will have left on the early years of digital marketing and advertising history, it will be for how they managed to butcher various language structures throughout the world with their new brand of "search engine friendly copywriting" style. 
                                                                                                                       
For those who are fairly new to search engine-friendly copywriting and optimization, the whole problem started years ago when many soon-to-be search-engine-friendly copywriters noticed a pattern in search engines such as AltaVista and Google, where the top results tended to skew more toward copy with higher repetition of whatever targeted "search-engine friendly" keyword phrases they happened to be using. 

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With their newfound search engine friendly copywriting knowledge and skills, some of these search engine friendly copywriters went out and presented search engine friendly copywriting seminars, and wrote lengthy articles on how to write "search engine friendly copy." As their search engine friendly copywriting recommendations were implemented, with repetitions of keywords as high as 20 to30 times in a 200-word search engine friendly copywriting article, these search engine friendly copy-written pages began to rank highly for terms such as "search engine friendly copywriting" and such.  

While search-engine-friendly copywriters continued to write about more diverse topics as "search engine friendly copywriting company" and "search engine friendly copywriting techniques," they also ensured that their search engine friendly copy had plenty of search engine friendly keyword repetition.        

What traditional copywriters did not understand, the search engine friendly copywriters would say, was that search engines read search-engine-friendly copy very literally, and if the copy wasn't "search engine friendly" enough for the given optimized keyword or keyphrase (for example, the keyphrase "search engine friendly copywriting"), then the page was less likely to rank, especially if it was not search engine friendly.  

Most of the professional search engine friendly copywriters have since backed off of the concept of practicing search engine friendly copywriting styles that incorporate excessive repetition of search engine friendly keywords, and are writing search engine friendly copy that is more easily read by humans, while still being "search engine friendly." This is a good thing, because even though copy may be deemed "search engine friendly," it doesn't necessarily make it readable, or sound intelligent enough that someone might want to actual convert to a customer, no matter how "search engine friendly" the copywriting may be.                                                            

So how many times should you repeat your target keyword in an article or passage so that it is both "search engine friendly" and "human friendly" enough?  How about once, in the first paragraph, as it relates to your main page theme. And don't forget to put the keyword theme in other search engine friendly areas of the page, like the title element, heading and alt text.        

To all of the U.S. Search Insider readers who managed to make it through this column on this Happy Thanksgiving Eve, have a Happy Thanksgiving, and enjoy your Happy Thanksgiving dinner.  May you have many more Happy Thanksgivings to come.   (To the rest of the world, Happy Thursday.)

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14 comments on "'Search-Engine-Friendly' Copywriting Style Is Often Not Very Friendly To Humans "

  1. Steve Knowles from Marketing Acumen
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 7:42 PM
    Hilarious! The sad thing is: this page is #6 on Google for search engine friendly copy, and #2 for search engine friendly copywriting and search engine friendly copy writers. Apparently, no penalties for stuffing key phrases like a Thanksgiving turkey!

  2. Melissa Cartagena-Ulrich from Marketing is Essential
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 7:26 PM
    I got a real kick out of this article related to "search engine friendly copywriting"! As I teach a few writers on my team about "search engine friendly copywriting" and how important it is important for them to understand what it means to write copy that is "search engine friendly". Many people think it is easy to write copy that is "search engine friendly" as well as "human friendly" but in fact it is a real challenge to write copy without just thinking about the "search engines" all the time. LOL - thanks for the information and thanks for the giggles. Great article.

  3. Scott Stroud from J. Rouleau & Associates
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 6:23 PM
    Great piece! But, I couldn't help it; I Googled "search engine friendly copywriting." Your article came up #2 on first page...

  4. Ed Hawco from ACE*COMM Corporation
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 6:16 PM
    Sadly funny and true post.

    When I made the jump from technical writing -- which, for me at least, was all about clarity -- to marketing copywriting, I hung on to that "clarity" thing. A couple of years ago I did a round of Web searching for copywriting tips and I was astounded to find a whole network of copywriting shysters pitching their latest and greatest ways to turn a huge buck with copywriting. What astounded me most was the extent to which most of them were terrible writers.

  5. Terry Wall from Terry Wall Consulting Grp
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 5:47 PM
    So.........how many times did he say it???? Nice job, Rob...I'm still chuckling!

  6. John Mallen from JMC Marketing Communications
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 5:30 PM
    Fabulous post! You lead those of us from more traditional ranks a bit smug because of the breeding, and, in addition, somewhat intimidated, realizing, too, that we also must learn search engine friendly writing style as well. What a great way to kick off Thanksgiving!

    You have to resuscitate this post April 1st!

  7. John Schmelig from Yahoo Search Marketing
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 3:34 PM
    I just couldn't resist Googling "search engine friendly copywriting" - and look! This article is already the #2 natural result!

  8. Hjortur Smarason from Scope Communications
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 3:13 PM
    LOL, this is probably the only "search engine friendly copy" that really keeps the reader all the way through. Great search engine friendly article and a very good reminder that you are first writing for the customer, the search engine friendliness come as number two. - Quality over quantity.

    And happy Thursday to you too :)

  9. Cat Wagman from Cohen & Company Creative
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 3:00 PM
    ThankYouThankYou (as a sign of appreciation, and "dot" com if you want to visit my website)

    Then there's "Why ... THANK YOU!" (a regularly heard response, and the name of my book)

    But really, Bob, I was almost tempted to count the number of times you used search engine friendly copywriting (plus one)

    I have found that when I start reading copy that is peppered with search engine friendly copywriting (plus two), the message gets lost ... I lose interest ... and then it's good-bye. However yours made the cut!!

    Have a wonderful and safe Thanksgiving!

  10. Carolyn Grantham from DFCI
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 2:50 PM
    Nice post! It also points to one reason I sometimes find it hard to convince people of the need for optimized content; while I'm thinking "careful, judicious use of keywords in a few places, used gracefully," they're thinking, "oh no! She's going to fill an elephant gun with keywords and ruin the user experience!"

    And this is why SEO copywriters should, IMHO, come from a writing/editing background, rather than the tech world.

  11. M Arnold from Quanta Basics
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 2:44 PM
    That's got to be one of the funniest posts I've read in a long time. And sadly, all too true. I'll have fun sharing this one with others - if only to say, "See! I told you so!"

  12. David Jaeger from About Results Marketing - Los Angeles Internet Marketing
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 2:43 PM
    LOL... K, I'm kinda guilty too... and I'm not embaressed...

    Heck, I decided that instead of screwing up the copy in the middle of the page, I just openly plug my site with the keywords that I'm trying to rank for at the end of the article.

    I am not just in SEO - I'm into sales conversion, and I definitely don't want to turn off the customer. So I woud rather suck up to the customer straight - just like I suck up to the search engines.

    This is a good reminder though... who to focus on

  13. susan kuchinskas from freelance
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 2:35 PM
    I'm laughing -- but it's not funny. I see a true and pervasive degradation in the quality of information -- and whole websites -- that I find via search. And, the more commercial the content, the more my results are clogged with splogs and spamsites.

  14. Tameka Kee from MediaPost
    commented on: November 21, 2007 at 2:29 PM
    Priceless Rob, priceless.

    I'm admittedly guilty of linking to some of those "4 tips for better SEO ad copy" blog posts for our Search Section 2 column -- but I try hard to make sure that the editorial is worthwhile (and readable!)

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