Try telling a story--one that can convey your sales pitch or lesson without triggering resistance. "A good story captures attention, and
draws the reader in. Right away, his emotions are stirred, and he cares about the outcome," Packer says.
Also, try stimulating all five senses with your copy. If possible, describe how the product or service feels, sounds and possibly even tastes. And Packer recommends using a conversational tone of voice. "Read your copy aloud and see if it passes the 'barstool test,'" she says. "If it sounds like you're talking to the person on the barstool beside you, it's good. If any line or sentence makes you stumble, rewrite it."